I found hard because I all way make my story not interesting
next time I would make my story interesting
Looking through my telescope I saw the moon And I maybe I can fly to the moon I imagine I was like on the top of the moon “Mum can I fly to the moon in Dad Rocket ship are you crazy no of course not Mum” I walked away for a few minutes but that didn't help I was still angry I ran to the garage and snuck inside. I climbed the ladder I open the hatch door and went inside I wasn't planning to launch the rocket ship wanted to hide brrrrrrrmmmmm!The rocket wobbled I had meant to Touch the red button 5 4 3 2 1 go!
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